Friday, May 1, 2015

When You Smile Comments

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When You Smile
Do you smile, for you see how far you have come
Or does your smile take you just where you want to be,
Into future destinations that you believe, you may see
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Lyn Paul
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 January 2016

When you smile! You reach my heart. Nice work.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 May 2015

Truly said, greed leads to destruction whereas our ego finds it constructive

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Jak Black 14 May 2015

Nicely worded, Lyn. Greed, it seems, is deeply embedded in human nature. So many are'nt aware of the damage it is causing to others and this world in general. Well written with a profound message.

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Rajesh Thankappan 10 May 2015

The photo portrays a harmonious picture and I believe that greed shall never sneak into it. As you have aptly described, ' Greed is a disease There is no cure The ingredients is like poison For it has been known to kill.' Yes, greed is a disease and since it is hard to find cure for it, one should be careful not to cultivate this habit.

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Valsa George 04 May 2015

Greed is a disease There is no cure The ingredients is like poison For it has been known to kill So correctly put! From the picture, I can guess once you were all smiles..... but the smile faded away in between! I am sure you have regained it back! Great write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 May 2015

A Beautiful pic Lyn. Baby is cute. We travel through wrong road, taking a wrong seat also. We realise it too late. sometime we feel we may pass the wrong road too, may be with some difficulties. Life is never a smooth and ride is too difficult sometimes. Beautiful poem. I loved reading it.

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