Sunday, March 31, 2019

When You See This Letter Comments

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When you see this letter,
I might be in sleep forever
But don't bother to feel alone
I will be always there for you
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HB Rita
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Jazib Kamalvi 31 March 2019

Great poetic feelings, Rita. But I think there should be some rhyme or metre in a poem. Am I right? Thanks for sharing.

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HB Rita 01 April 2019

Thanks for your review. It is a free verse writing. Again, you can give me some idea of connecting the poem with metre if you have tie. I will gladly accept any suggestions or tips.

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