When You Roam Around (Sonnet 1) Comments

Wonderful imagination. Fantastic expression. Interesting to read. Let me quote some lines.. When your mum and dad had sent you to school And you had turned round and called them old fools ***************************************************** And if you were a girl, you'd go round town Looking for a man of whom to pull down ***************************************** Then one day, like a ball had umteenth burst So you die like a rat a trap had caught Thanks for sharing dear Osim.