Monday, August 2, 2010

When You Return Comments

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at first when you told me
you were leaving
i thought youd
never be coming back
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Dakota Hecht
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Whispering Rose 02 August 2010

'but i know i dont want to be that girl who was stupid enough to fall for someone who wouldnt fall back' very good expressions the poem holds great confusion...very well written

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David Beckham 02 August 2010

Writing is liberating, and redeeming. I have great likeness for the expressions contained withing. Its art and its poetry and its expressive. Well done

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