Friday, December 18, 2009

When You'Re Gone (Song) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I always needed time on my own
I never thought I'd need you there when I cry
And the days feel like years when I'm alone
And the bed where you lie is made up on your side
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Wassila Nader
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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 08 April 2010

A deep and passionate yearning full of love and longing. Nice verse

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Edna Ipalei 17 February 2010

very passionate and melodious. great work.10+

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 January 2010

Repetitions gave life to this write. Melodious.

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Antonio Liao 25 January 2010

Superb words...lighted with passion.... a nemesis of the memories of life beyond expectation of life....thanks for sharing. God bless a 10 +++++

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Antonio Liao 25 January 2010

Superb words...lighted with passion.... anemesis of the memories of life beyond expectation of life....thanks for sharing. God bless a 10 +++++

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Nilufer Dursun 04 January 2010

Love and longing are told nicely in this poem, a good work.I like it. Nilufer DURSUN

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Hamid Kareem 01 January 2010

This is a beautiful poem. Nice work

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 01 January 2010

That will really sound so nice with a tune.. i like it. :)

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