Tuesday, December 6, 2011

When You'Re Gone... Comments

Rating: 5.0

How many sorrow in a single tear?
Four seasons in one day, instead of a year.
How many seconds in a stretched-out day?
I miss you when you are away.
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Sylvia Lukeman 29 December 2011

That was so very moving.Your words convey so much You are welcome to visit my poetry. Sylvia

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Sonali Sings 12 December 2011

Nice poem..variety of emotions blending into a single poem.

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Dead Leaf 11 December 2011

i love this poem.....well written...

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Dave Walker 08 December 2011

A very emotion packed poem. A really great write.

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Gordon Tseng 08 December 2011

How many poems can you write, during those nights you can't see his eyes? Nice work!

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Words very profound, words massanging a reflection of emotions and state of mind, words very I would like to relate myself to. I have much respect for your greatness Lady Broad, strong poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 07 December 2011

'Tis a g'd poem and I love this, , I do write poems like this taste! ! ! ! '''How many songs one guitar can play''' I love this line as the soul of this poem, , , top marks for you! ! ! !

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Jinal Oswal 07 December 2011

Jacqui i love this poem.. How many sorrow in a single tear? No one in this world will ever understand this.. the only person who can ans is you sweetheart... Its you who knows how you can put a stop... Tke cre dear..

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Silentpoet Grl 07 December 2011

i really like this write - words that sting the heart... such thoughts filled with sadness -great write!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 06 December 2011

Great poem J, though bitter sweet...great write.

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Eric Cockrell 06 December 2011

oozes the sweet sadness of love and distance! good poem!

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Unwritten Soul 06 December 2011

Love this big meaning words 'How many songs can one guitar play? ' wow as long as someone play the strings it will sing..but please let someone can play music to do that or our ears bleed and we plead to stop listening hahahahaha Nice write Jac! _Unwritten Soul

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