Monday, July 7, 2014

When You'Re Close To Me Comments

Rating: 4.6

I love when you get so close to me,
With your lips pressed against my ear,
Then passion starts to speak for you,
Forbidden words I long to hear
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Lora Colon
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 August 2014

your heart print, stunning

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David Lessard 11 July 2014

Sweet romantic dreaming fills the poet's soul with satisfaction.

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Amitava Sur 10 July 2014

WOW /' - Lora, It's so beautiful so romantic and so rhythmic, I have no words to say. Though you lay heaven at my feet I know the devil's in disguise .......... beautiful I hear the doves as I awaken, Through my window the daylight streams, .... so nice

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Chuy Amante 08 July 2014

Please do a poem about the forbidden words I'm working on improving my vocabulary! wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! !

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 08 July 2014

I hear the doves as I awaken, Through my window the daylight streams, How I love when you're close to me..... Even though it's just in my dreams words that linger long after read.

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Seamus O Brian 07 July 2014

Very romantic. Nice rhythm. Artistic use of rhyme and rhythm paints an intimate, warm picture. Thank you for sharing this.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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