Saturday, April 14, 2018

When You Pray Tonight Comments

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Baby its hard to live the truth
but its so much harder
when you live a lie
baby when you pray tonight
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Dorsey Baker
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Nika Mcguin 14 April 2018

Wow! This is so impacting, I'm almost scared to ask what the speaker's woes and tribulations are. All the same this is an impressive write. It reminds me of poems by Langston Hughes, it's got a jazzy/blues rhythm to it. Perhaps this could even be used as a song.

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