When You Open Your Window Poem by Dorsey Baker

When You Open Your Window

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When your open
your window wide
the sun is going to
come in
and that 'ol demon of depression
is going to
fly away!

its going to
go blind
when the sun gets in its eyes
because it just
cannot compete!
with sunny skies


When you open
your window wide
the sun is going to
come in

and that 'ol demon of
depression is going to

get up
and fly away
when the room
is full of light
darkness
has no place to stay!

that 'ol demon of depression

he has got to
get up
and fly away!

Monday, April 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 29 April 2019

opening window wide ... the room is full of light darkness has no place to stay! //// it's a beautiful poem and poetic expression

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Sandra Feldman 29 April 2019

I love your optimistic encouragement in this lovely poem I read it but really could hear it as song that we should sing when feeling low. Yes, open windows let the sun shine in and optimism flow. What better way to grow?

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