Tuesday, September 23, 2008

When You Loved Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

When you loved me,
There were always rainbows
In the sky,
When you loved me,
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Katherine Wiley 04 October 2008

Wonderfully poignant memories of fresh love, and then loss of love. Made me remember those very things of long ago that perhaps will never return. Lovely work. Kate

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Magda Graf 28 September 2008

Such a sad poem - and so beautiful. The passage about the last letter is really touching. Love, Magda

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Marilyn Lott 23 September 2008

Lost love is so sad, and most of us have experienced it at one time or another. Very heartfelt, Dorothy! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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