Wednesday, May 30, 2007

When You Love Someone Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you love someone
You see the splendor of spring
Burst into life in the magic of his smile.
You sleep with his name in your lips
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Jemarie Ragudo
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Willis Martyn 19 July 2008

inteligent, romantic, open, wonderful.

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John Nightingale 16 January 2008

Loves electricity continues to spark, even when the lover has left. Lovely work.

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Blue angel Florida 13 November 2007

' Waiting, even when the waiting is in vain ' - I wish I could learn not to do it though :)

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Lee Degnan 20 September 2007

Wow, this is an exquisite write, full of hope and love for someone... how every minute of every day, every thought evolves around that special someone... and then at the end of the poem, the reader isn't even sure that the other person even knows you exists... the poem just kind of yanks ya at the end... You've outdone yourself. I think it's your best write so far! Big hugs well done, Lee

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It's really true that, if you are inlove you felt that there's never a dull moment in it. It's very True..Keep it up!

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