When You Love Someone Comments

touching and strong emotive lines as so often.... saturday evenings and nights...bare thye fangs and so much pain lies around amid the giggles and the thumping beats.. beautiful lines cheers

marvelous.. wonderful peice thts how a pain should take form of words...

Fine rhyme/rhythm fine poetry! pain also painted beautifully! 10+

A sweet poem.......... simple words and deep meaning. keep it up

Hi Shilpa, on a Saturday night, you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon. How calm... All your love, passion, obsession……. poured in tears.... A poem like a gorgeous river... nobody could notice whether it is weeping or smiling.. lovely poem.. lovely feelings.. coooool.. and freezing... chilly pain with sugary toppings.. nice.... Jaleel

It was a Saturday night about ten o'clock, You heard the news and it wasn't a shock. You knew this was going to happen soon, As you laid there and cried in the pale lit moon.... schock at failure but good description of love and its spell boundd efect.. i love it...10 read mine 'Cry not' o.mother, papa do u know and papa you too and dear sun

nice flow of expression! ! ! ! ! ! !