When you love someone
You become see-through
Your eyes become readable
You come open and vulnerable
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very true...nice write..wonderful thoughts... when we love someone, we tend to forget ourselves.. make our mind close....and think 'life is beautiful.....
i know exactly how you feel. you just want to become there possession. they would love and cherish every moment of there life. i wish to be with somebody who loves me more then i do for them your writing shows sincerely how you feel
Indeed..I agree... When you love someone..you become someone you never thought you could become... Great concept..great poem!
well expressed emotion of person in love...basing probably in experience.. good theme..nice write... Ency Bearis
It's a sweet little poem enchanting the beauty of love! My favorite lines: When you love someone/You become happy and sad all at once/You become beautiful and insecure/You forget your uniqueness....Thanks for spreading love...Loved reading it! (10)