Monday, December 8, 2008

When You Love Someone Comments

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When you love someone
You become see-through
Your eyes become readable
You come open and vulnerable
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Eljay Ladia
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 February 2018

It's a sweet little poem enchanting the beauty of love! My favorite lines: When you love someone/You become happy and sad all at once/You become beautiful and insecure/You forget your uniqueness....Thanks for spreading love...Loved reading it! (10)

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Miriam Maia Padua 07 January 2009

very true...nice write..wonderful thoughts... when we love someone, we tend to forget ourselves.. make our mind close....and think 'life is beautiful.....

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Sky Blue 16 December 2008

i know exactly how you feel. you just want to become there possession. they would love and cherish every moment of there life. i wish to be with somebody who loves me more then i do for them your writing shows sincerely how you feel

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Min Sia 08 December 2008

Indeed..I agree... When you love someone..you become someone you never thought you could become... Great concept..great poem!

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Ency Bearis 08 December 2008

well expressed emotion of person in love...basing probably in experience.. good theme..nice write... Ency Bearis

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Eljay Ladia

Eljay Ladia

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