When You Left Me Comments

this little poet write from heart and own feels in words When you left me you broke my heart you ripped it out and tore it apart I still feel the ache

I ardently hope you have not read this before but if you have send me the poem original and i will take this poem down

When you left me you broke my heart you ripped it out and tore it apart I still feel the ache of not having you here I still cry at night great poem... rich idea, sweet composition of words, , , verses are well put at there right place.. inspiring way f writing.. and hope you add more to enjoy.. really wonderful piece of poetry... best of luck kayla 10/10

Hmm! I am sure i have read this poem before...............