Tuesday, October 7, 2008

When You Know Comments

Rating: 4.3

When you know i cannot take anymore living without you
when you know you are the first and the last for me
when you know i am waiting for you till the death
when you know i don't wanna tell anybody 'i love you'
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Little Sunshine
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Thad Wilk 30 December 2008

A sad poem, sometimes love hurt's; if he doe's not feel 'the same way too', then (moving on) is the 'best thing' - for you to do! ! Best wishes Hataw! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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sara }i{ 01 December 2008

well done.......but u must get over it i know it hard but u must to

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 17 October 2008

u expressed ur pain and ur heartfelt love for someone... beautiful... : D

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Mehmet YILMAZLAR 13 October 2008

i m scenting hate; when you know you will vamit your rage with your poetry.....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 October 2008

Intense love emitting this poem! painfully sweet! I fear pain! so I am running away fast! opps, must giving u 10++++ heart-felt expressions!

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<font color=black>Nagourta 08 October 2008

You have lived in this sadness for quite a long while, poor lass...

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 October 2008

Better to have loved and lost they say, but it never take the hurt away..

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