Friday, April 9, 2010

When You Have Few To Say Comments

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However, my heart has few to say
That when you speak or choose not to,
My love, it fades away.
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My Lady Eagle
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Gan Chennai 19 April 2010

Hi Jeff Pua, Very Nice. Your poems are of Microscopic Level about Love. That's Your Age. I wish you cover more on Life, Nature, Humanity and Everything atleast in your later part of your life. Read my poem 100,000 Love Stories. I recommend this, since you write exclusively on Love, for our existence itself is LOVE.

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Marieta Maglas 15 April 2010

very nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism, thank you for sharing... 10

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Salvie Rosales 10 April 2010

Nicely written and really with feelings...

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Ena N. Mori 09 April 2010

'But no, Half of me was lost Or even was the whole; Or maybe not- For I'm complete.. Completely gone insane...' i like the pacing in your poem...beautiful

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