Thursday, September 13, 2007
When You Feel Me Comments
Rating: ★5.0
I see the sun
shines in my hair
when your hands
is it's dress
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sara wiliams
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
13 September 2007
Well done, Sara...Mellifluous structure...i like the repetition inthe 2nd stanza...it compliments the serene tone you establish from the start-up... ~ FjR ~
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7/22/2025 7:13:33 PM # 1.0.0
I see the sun shines in my hair when your hands is it's dress.........................most beautiful imagery i am yet to find that carries with it with every thing implecit, thanks for sharing