Sunday, June 28, 2009

When You Fall Comments

Rating: 5.0

You need to pick yourself up again
Even thought it might hurt like hell
and things might be broken
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Anna Malmenlid
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Afzal Shauq 13 October 2009

You need to do it To prove to yourself that you're not scared That you can learn from your mistakes And the start to all of that well done dear anna.. again a good poem with sweet logic and the plea is once again some how semi philosophical.. and heart touching one..really liked it..appreciate your work..10/10

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Harold K Schreiberg 14 September 2009

Well-written & so accurate. The kind of poem one should remember in times of pain or grief. Thanks for posting!

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