Sunday, November 9, 2014

When You Fall Comments

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When you fall

Once I talked with a leaf
(Yellow, brown, wet, smashed)
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Nassy Fesharaki
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 10 November 2014

Life is gone; it's normal, no complaint. I, eager, wanted more; and was not satisfied. The pain is of the weight! A beautiful poem depiction of a concern of a beautiful heart.I felt it in my heart. Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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