When You Dance Poem by Ahmad Ali Shah Mashal

When You Dance

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When you dance,
the heart of the universe
goes out of control
constellations forget their choreography,
and comets pause mid-flight
to watch you spin.

The moon loses count of its tides,
and time skips a breath,
as your feet sketch galaxies
into the silence of the night.

Each gesture
a prayer of motion,
each twirl
a whispered spell,
pulling the cosmos
into the orbit of your soul.

When you dance
the universe doesn't just watch...
it listens.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leria Hawkins 12 March 2026

Lovely poem, I wanted to dance along with every line!

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Brooke Renwick 12 March 2026

This is very good!

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