Saturday, April 14, 2018

When You Cross My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

I remember the days
when loving you was an unending ache
yet the mere thought of letting you go
made me feel as if my heart would disintegrate
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Nika McGuin
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 24 April 2018

Time heals everything.......Nika.........to move on letting go things is not as easy as it seems to be but.......... take this pansy blossom and study well its face.....don't you feel its power when plucked the wound is healed by nature........so does the same thing happen with life......pain heals but scar remains.....very well scripted...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 April 2018

But I'm so grateful that time moves on I've moved on too; picking up the pieces you left behind each one a lesson - and they've made me so strong today only sadness and thankfulness mingle as you cross my mind.........touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem shared amazingly. Dear Nika, I appreciate your way of presentation and Poet's note which is so true. Thank u for sharing this gem.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2018

A wonderful and honest write that gives hope. Very inspiring. Beautifully crafted.10

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