Wednesday, November 12, 2008

When You Count Each Breath Of You! ! Comments

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Life crawls at snail’s pace when you count every breath of you! !
There it comes; thanks to Haven here it goes.
Feeling every inch of pain and tribulation
Go through every inch of anxiety and frustration.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 November 2008

wow! matured composition! thoughtful indeed. ammmmazing imagery! 10++++

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hmmmm....perhaps an intelligent net for slowing down the reckless ceaseless time

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Billy Joe Collins 12 November 2008

great poem i find myself counting as well this poem makes me think thanks for sharing

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