When You Come To See Off Comments
When I am gone, who will come to see
my lifeless form, lying peacefully?
Will it be those who loathed my name,
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Your poem of loving remembrance is elegantly written and touching.5 stars
So sadly beautiful and poetically deep, an unforgettable poem that says so much and that in our hearts with deep admiration we will keep.
p3 the final touchstone testament value of life is attesting to the stirring quality of impressions bequeathed, the warmth or cold felt enduring in lives we touched
p2 because evil cannot stand pure beautified souls; a universal truth is lives loved or hated live on, rise in memories left heartwarming cherished virtue esteemed or dark lingering echoes;
p1 an exquisite reflection upon life and the lifeless body, laid out in recent death in a peaceful passing, the value of a spent name; sometimes beautiful people incite rage in response demon souls 'with hearts of stone and eyes of flame',
I wrote the poem 'Verdict Deeds Time Seal Departing Souls', inspired by the poem 'When You Come To See Off', by the poet M. Asim Nehal and dedicated to M. Asim Nehal.
a beautiful poem contemplating the lifeless body laid to rest and various emotions of mourners, with contrast elements of nature and metaphor infused into the poem. I once wrote a poem 'Shed No Tears' about memories left after passing with similar elements but a differing perspective.
I wrote the poem 'Lifeless Body Is Laid Out In Mourning Memories', inspired by the poem 'When You Come To See Off', by the poet M. Asim Nehal and dedicated to M. Asim Nehal.
Great similies and nice lines 'For only in death, can we truly see the impact we've made, with our legacy.
We all have our own fantasy about death. You wrote yours wonderfully.
I would trade all my best poems for this one. Liked it so much. TFS.
A beautiful, heartfelt and meaningful poem on life and death. So brilliantly expressed and presented. Fantastic closure lines! To my favorites.
You left me wondering, I am speechless and wandering in mu own thoughts, such is the impact of your poem on me.
Marvellous poem. Fantastic summation to the mathematics of life and physics of death.
Ernest request 'So when I'm gone, and you come to see, remember me, with love and empathy.'
Our legacy is our memories. We leave everything on earth, I mean all material things but the greatest of all is our memories shared with loved ones.
An awesome poem with great thoughts! Like a butterfly, I'll leave this world, my soul unfurled, a story unfold. Or like a rose, my petals will fall, but my fragrance will linger, through it all.
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7/20/2025 3:29:05 PM # 1.0.0
I see a hint of philosophy in your poem, It tells us how desperate we are to know what happens after we are gone, but no one has ever turned back to see.....