When You Come Comments

Tell me when you will come? I find a great depth in this powerful inquisition! A lovely poem.....10

Freedom! ! ! ! Longing! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

When you dashed on my shore the birds flew away from the trees. Then I wrote a poem on you..your presence, your dashing, my love, and my joy makes me write...... how true. this is really a poetic experience. poetry is born out of l ove.. thank u. tony

A good one, Akham; enjoyed reading it.