Friday, January 29, 2016

When You Are Far…. Comments

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When you are far away from me
And you feel like seeing me
I will appear in sky by being mooned
To spend the night with you.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

A philosophical touch to a wonderful idea, this is the magic you create for the readers, Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem, Asim.

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T Rajan Evol 02 February 2016

Both versions are fantastic.

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Nosheen Irfan 01 February 2016

What a lovely poem, expressing love in a simple, yet powerful way. The reader savors its soft n tender feel long after reading it.

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Mihaela Pirjol 30 January 2016

Wisely stated: '' Time has the healing power It can cure all wounds '' A beautiful love poem!

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Rajnish Manga 29 January 2016

Anybody would like to have such a versatile friend and a companion in life. Thanks, Asim ji. Just close your eyes for a few seconds You will find me in within

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M. Asim Nehal

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