When You Are Borne And Gone Comments

What did you do in life? Amassed enough wealth

What did you do in life? Amassed enough wealth Robbed and killed many innocents Just for self and family members

What did you do in life? Amassed enough wealth Robbed and killed many innocents Just for self and family members

You come with naked body As natural as flower With pink rose face and fists closed

You come with naked body As natural as flower With pink rose face and fists closed You cried in full and all laughed at you..10

absolutely true and well penned...especially liked the title...

Wow well put together 10+

When we leave this earth, we cannot take even a eye-broken needle with us. Only the good or bad deeds come with us as (vasanas) experience for our next birth. This poem is an eye opener and is well composed.

All trains come to an abrupt halt, u r born as flower...10

You come with naked body as it is usual...10

What happens if we have one religion? No cast, no creed and no more legions great and simple life to be lived...10

You come with naked body As natural as flower With pink rose face and fists closed...u departed with good fame nname...10

You cried in full and all laughed at you What did they expect you to become..u cried when came into this world...10

You cried in full and all laughed at you What did they expect you to become? what u wanted to become in life...10

Amassed enough wealth Robbed and killed many innocents..should be lived for others...10

Amassed enough wealth Robbed and killed many innocents Just for self and family members one should discharge his duties and live...10

You come with naked body As natural as flower basic facts of the life...10

life should be made worth...10

You come with naked body life should be lived full length...10

You come with naked body life is worth living...10