Friday, November 6, 2015

When You Are Alone, Single And Deserted Comments

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When you are alone,
single, deserted or lonely at home
when the climate is silent and calm without any sound
or when you feel that there is no one around,
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Pranayee Rachamalla
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 21 September 2017

nice poem A similar one a gal asked me rather shared with me her loneliness she was alone all day mom and pop went to labour they left her with a servant boy and then learned she had gone into labour such a sad situation should never occur find a companion soon share if necessary with a neighbour but be choosy the world is dicey as the gal above hope you read me slaughter loneliness compose poetry sing a song may be but stay not alone make friends with poets but never get intimate guys only want to be merry then do and run away in a hurry don't forget the gals plight a teen labour she and through a labour homely

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Kishore Kumar Das 01 June 2016

Perhaps you have found a medicine for curing loneliness at midnight....but I would appreciate your concern about loneliness.....this is a problem since time immemorial....and the cure lies in the feeling that you are not lonely at any point of time...

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i have seen people who are scared of night, actually this poem is for fun, that when we do such things at night, like switching on a horror movie and all we naturally feel some supernatural force present there, i just wanted to write a poem make it a fun, thank you sir for reading my poem!

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Dev Anand 05 May 2016

this is a beautiful poem. thank you very much for this poem dear poetess. dev

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my pleasure sir! thanks a lot for your comment and for reading my poem too!

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Sanika Khairnar 30 January 2016

i was so taken away by your words pranayee. the flow of dark intrusive feelings and the scary ambiance that you created! ! splendid! ! and your description! ! i am a hopeless fan! !

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thanks a lot my dear friend! ........so nice of your comments..........thank you

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Anita Khelawan 29 December 2015

Such a well written poem.. your descriptive writing is on point... I truly enjoyed your poem... thnx for sharing... and for reading my poem as well.. much thanks

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thanks a lot for your comment.......

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 December 2015

What's inside can never be compensated with the worldly noise... Loneliness is a curse try to get over it... Beautifully expressed emotion.

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thank u madam for reading and commenting on my poem...

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Bharati Nayak 13 November 2015

The poem reflects the scary feelings of loneliness, that most of us have come through at some point in life.The poet nicely conveys the feelings of fear, panics and heart beats that surround the lonely soul.Thanks for sharing.

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thank u maam for ur comment......

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Souren Mondal 06 November 2015

An interesting poem on lonliness and fear. Thank you for sharing Pranayee :)

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thank u.......

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