When You And I Embrace Comments

A brilliant poem dear poetess LeeAnn. My friend Richard has made a comprehensive review of this poem and he has left no rooms for me to add anything more. A beautiful poem...just beautiful!

Love really does hurt, when it's no longer there, as conveyed in the stirring lines of this captivating poem. Beautifully written, LeeAnn.

I won't fall in love with any one else.A really great assurance in love of any kind.

************* unlimited for this wonderful poem.

Expression of true love nicely written I quote 'I won't fall in love with anyone else I'll live in solitude As the empty bed burns'

Sometimes we don't hold so tightly the love we have as the love we dream about.

love can so entrance us that we are left in a dark void when it is no longer there---a poem that is beautiful and sad at the same time--a heaven full of guardian stars for this and a fav

Deep sad and touching poem about love lost. Top Marks dear LeeAnn. Brilliantly worded the final line. TFS

2) Your last line also brought to mind the TV film, The Burning Bed. According to TV critic Matt Seitz, the film is the 7th greatest American TV-movie ever made...and of Farrah Fawcett's performance...'one of the finest in the history of TV-movies'. It's very realistically based on a true story!

LeeAnn, your whole poem so finely captures the essence of love lost. And your last line, only five words long, is a whole book on the essence of loneliness suffered as a result of love lost. I can't emphasize enough the genius of that one line!

Poignant, for fate is so cruel. Good poem, LeeAnn

As the empty bed burns..... excellent.....

Powerful statement!