Saturday, March 18, 2006

When Wonders Burst Intact Upon The Eye Comments

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When wonders burst intact upon the eye
demanding focus and attention full:
of mind and will and spirit, too, they fly
into conscious awareness, where they gently pull
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Hugh Cobb
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kskdnj sajn 02 April 2006

Hugh this is perfect for my forum debate last week, and the quote I came up with... When the common man takes an ordinary experience and turns it into an extraordinary..he is indeed an artist.' Fantastic poem, thought, and language Don't know how I missed this one! :) Ang.

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Anna Russell 20 March 2006

What a fantastic title! I loved this, it had a sort of Gothic quality to it - and of course, one of those wonders is finding a poem just like this. Hugs Anna xxx

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Scarlett Treat 19 March 2006

The 'wonder' is just the thing that keeps us going, searching for it, trying to capture it in words from our limited minds. Hugh, I love your work. Scarlett PS The only thing that bothered me about this work is your use of & sign in the next to last line. Sorta took away from the beauty of the work. Scarlett

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Ray Andrews 18 March 2006

A very nice poem! ! These wonders keep me going! ! Best Regards Ray

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