Sunday, December 30, 2012

When Withered Leaves Fell On My Guitar... Comments

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Hammered with sorrows wen i was alone,

creamed with joy wen i was with my second love,
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Mukesh Parmar
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Barbara Nixon 05 January 2013

Beautifully written poem, capturing your emotion, . Great work

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Hazel Durham 01 January 2013

So beautifully written about a teenagers love showing the angst and joy! ! A great title, love it! !

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Mukesh Parmar

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