Wednesday, December 8, 2004

When Willows Weep Comments

Rating: 3.7

A river always likes to flow
downhill - from up to down -
its water somehow seems to know
to find the nearest town.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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tis a classic timeless piece you present... but with the undercurrents clearly directing flows in torrential force... aka in pure H.x style... ...

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Lenchen Elf 08 December 2004

Spot on H, Thank you: -)

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Kelly Allen Vinal 08 December 2004

Herbert - an astounding piece of work. Impeccable meter and intense message. Very well done.

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Allan James Saywell 08 December 2004

Herbert a great poem, wonderfull title very tidal, i love a good poem to finish wether i write it or read it, thank you herbert regard's AJS

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Sandra Osborne 08 December 2004

Excellent! The best of yours that I have read yet. This had great flow ;)

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