Sunday, April 17, 2011

When Will You Come Home? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting in the corner of the room so dark
Silence grips my soul …why are we apart?
My mind replays the moment that you walked away
Why did we let this happen? I wanted you to stay
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Jon Arno
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Rekha Mandagere 17 April 2011

Some questions always remain unanswered! Thought provoking poem. Rhyme pattern is beautiful. Rekhamandagere Marks 10

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