Tuesday, January 19, 2016

When Will You Come? Comments

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When will you come,
to take me home,
wrapping in your arms,
with your eyes of charm,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Gajanan Mishra 19 January 2016

so lovely, so beautiful, so smooth. I salute you..

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 January 2016

Smooth as satin sliding off silk...Well structured work...Mellifluous...Well played metaphoric employment in depicting death and destiny via pictorial imagescaping. Well Done, Veer! /////~FjR~ \\\\\

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