Monday, April 26, 2010
When Will They Be Free. Comments
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When life will unbound
so will they free themselves from the fear.
As might grows
so will they embrace it with the lust of greed.
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7/19/2025 12:04:39 AM # 1.0.0
Very inspirational poem. My only suggestion would be to separate the lines differently, they way it's cut off in the sentences is a little confusing. For example, instead of; 'When life will unbound so will they free themselves from the fear.' maybe try; 'When life will unbound so will they free themselves from the fear.' It would just make it a little clearer. Just a suggestion. But over all I loved this poem, certainly keep writing.