Tuesday, April 21, 2015

When Will It End? Comments

Rating: 5.0

I notice the storm heading our way
The dark gray clouds overlapping
Seems like its taking days
The lightning raises the hairs on my legs
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Melissa L Tamayo
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Edward Kofi Louis 05 June 2015

Seems like its taking days; but, one day it will end. Yes, with the muse of hope. Nice work.

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Chinedu Dike 21 April 2015

Morally challenging train of thoughts, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction. The use of appropriate similes to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕10

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Kelly Kurt 21 April 2015

Well written poem, Melissa. Thank you

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Melissa L Tamayo

Melissa L Tamayo

Bronx, NY
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