When Where You Live, Is Not Where Anyone Should Go. Comments

although a lovely readable poem that flows in like the tide and there is attached drama not to mention a bit of theatrics...i enjoyed reading it and more so trying the jig saw puzzle and plat...falling flat Contextually a bit challenged...i gave up. Sometimes its fun to do an early morning head scratch to get at a nicely wrapped enigma... Somewhat like guessing what’s in the neatly folded paper while sipping morning coffee with a distant focused eye... Cheers :) sat

This is a good poem..though there is room for improvement..if best is achievable, do not settle for good.

nice piece of life keep it like that on ur way to the thruth

Wow, its been long I saw someone write about death in such a simple way. Nice one Adrianne.