Wednesday, July 26, 2006

When We Was Young Comments

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I remember when we was young, we played football at the park
You, your friends and I would play for hours until it got dark

I remember when we was young, we always played on the nintendo
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Ellena Jason 12 July 2018

I remember when I was a child, I was able to hear the pleasant songs of birds at every early morning... I was wishing to Grow old sooner, to break the force bonds and be my lady.... I'm closer to the wish, but I a gift.... I can not hear the birds' song... I'ts not only me... It's about all the grown humans... but if a coin falls on the ground, everyone turns to where the that the coin's fallen... it seemed that we're old, in our youngest parts of our lives....

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we would take heart to heart which the natural emotion of love neatly said by the poet and it is good.

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shygirl 93 09 November 2008

please carry on writing you have an amazing talent that can not be learned but is given to those who least expect it

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Tom Daly 26 July 2006

very good lauren that is past you have come out the other side look at the future you have a wonderful life ahead of you

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Lauren White

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