Friday, December 5, 2008

When We See Desert And Wail Comments

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We're again on the detested desert
that looks afar like a tiding ocean
where water waves its body on the banks
as she celebrates in glee of nature's grace.
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BAMIDELE KOGBE
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Eyan Desir 18 February 2009

nice write good poem haha

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sumaira .....ir 10 February 2009

really superb message 4 all.... well write 10 4 u rgds sumaira

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 30 December 2008

Bamidele - We will remain on the 'detested desert' that exists in all lands until we lose the detested deserts in our hearts. A powerful message here! Blessings - Cheryl Note - Very much like my poem, 'Black Belt Blues', see if you agree.

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