Saturday, August 2, 2008

When We Met… Comments

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When we met,
Fate,
the compassionate compass
brought us so close to each other,
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Bharat Trivedi
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Jay P. Narain 02 August 2008

Very nice and picturesque poem. I love all your other poems.

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Tia Metcher 02 August 2008

'Hi! ', That was magnificent. very picturesque. You did a wonderful job constructing such a beautiful poem. WELL DONE! Cheers :)

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