Monday, July 9, 2018

When We Met Comments

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I remember your face,
I remember your voice,
I remember the face which lightened with expectations,
I remember the voice which quivered with happiness,
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Unnikrishnan E S 08 August 2019

Hi Malabika, It is quite exciting that our mind is often able to keep the vivid record of our first meeting with a person, who later becomes part of life, a loved one. Like a very close friend, the spouse....To recall these cherished memories is to relive the first experience. And these memories make our life worth living. You are, in the poem, reliving the experience of the first meeting with a beloved, with vivid clarity. Your poem carries the reader through your experience. Loved it.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 08 December 2019

Dear Poet, So nice to read your thoughtful comments and the way you have analyzed the emotions! Thank you sincerely!

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