A ray of laser
it passes from our body
into the person opposite
and when it enters his person
...
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hey.. i like the way... you done your poem.. the little notion one gets when meeting with various types of strangers.. some love us, some hate us.. some becomes our foes.... awesome lines... but in real life its true... we do get these notions..atleast i have... keep writing..good goin.....
lovely poem, Lalitha...it is a lovely poem; I just flowed with its rhythm and feeling and power...it is indeed beautiful and the lines so luminous... To answer the qn asked: Perhaps because some have no poetry/music in them... suggestion: dont=don't
your poems have a dreamy feel to them...they live somewhere between sadness and dream...great to read but puts me in a sad mood.