When We Make Love Comments
Baby I lay serene beside you
the only time I feel love so true
as your skin clothe me
thoughts of pleasure run through me.
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The sentiments and passion can't be argued with.... The rhyme doesn't suit your style. I like your free stuff better. Rx
It is beautiful and it does remind me of the moment our fingers find each other....so beautiful
Love-play beautifully transformed into poetry. Hats off, Reshma.
A poetic statement of bold and beautiful- A subject shedding inhibitions and hypocracy beautifully transalted with excellent imagery.
oh, la la Resh! ! ! This is so sexy! ! ! Smolderingly hot. A 10++++
Such realism couched in poetic lines, outclass 'Lady Chatterley's Lover', or whatever one may have in mind! -Raj Nandy
very brave attempt n highly successful... Sex sans vulgarity...one of the best example
wow....wow.....wow.....i loved this one...........so refreshin' n vibratin'. your so skin deep reshma....marvellous!
i love poems that has connetative meanings...i loved ur poem. it is brave of u to write such a poem
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7/23/2025 12:39:57 PM # 1.0.0
maybe this time, i have to close my eyes, this must be global warming :)