When we go, do we all have to play harps? If we do,
I'm assuming we'll instantly know how to play them,
right? It's not like we'll have to take lessons or anything,
right? (cause you know what drudgery that can be - all
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Ah.. I've just finished all seven of your current deadly sins, laughing all the way. A very George Carlin-esque tone to these works ('Can God make a rock so big, that even he can't lift it? ') . Well done. You could run with this theme a long time. Likewise, I'm looking forward to 'PoHo's poems on politics'. -chuck
ha ha ha! it is about time you got recognized for your outstanding comments to Bob Gotti, ProPoHo. they are works of art in their own right. Jake
:) You did well..only thing I didn't like was the line in parentheses. It just seemed to detract from the impact of the irony..not sure why but I liked it without. Can't wait to see the rest of these!
What I think is...If you sell God on this one, I want you as my contract negotiator. Nice story Rusty
An interesting thought to say the least! Where do you come up with this stuff? This was so much fun to read and it left me really wondering and now I'm thinking about what ''job'' I'd like to have up in Heaven. Hmmm. (And, no, I don't think I'd want to be your roady, sorry.) Sincerely, Mary
lol...ask Bob Gotti..I'm sure he will have your answer..or John..ask John.
Cute, Prof. PoHo. And you don't usually do cute. Enjoyed the ride.
I found the content of this poem brilliant. The execution was IMO just mediocre. Also, I am positive that you can do much better. Best H