When we first met you use to pinch me and punch me because that’s what little girls do.
You use to tell me that I was stupid and things like that.
As months went by you use to tease me and taunt me because that’s what girls do.
Then one day you began to notice me for me.
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'When we first met you use to pinch me and punch me because that’s what little girls do.' hey I did the same---therefore I can connect with you. lovely write anjali (if time permits do read any of my poems)
Scott first of all thank you for the cooment on my poem. your poem was written so beautiful with full of emotion. you should be proud of your work and your wife too must be proud of you. i loved it and look forward to reading more of your work.
Oh my goodness. I love this it brought back so many memories. I met my husband in the 8th grade. It is wonderful to be married to your best friend. Thank you for reminding me.
this poem gives such a mushy feeling.... Yes... more than anything else a couple needs to be friends first.... thanks for sharing
This is so beautiful, Scott. It does my heart good to know that there are couples in the world that stick together and love each other for so long. I'm happy for you and your wife! Barbara
True love is like that as you depicted in your poetry. What one goes through for the other's affection is so sad sometimes. This work reminds me of a chapter in Leo Tolstoy's War and Peace of Nicolas seeing Princes Mary for the first time, but that she had to wait for his love till he came back from the war.
Mr. Austin, This poem reminds me so much of my husband and I. We have been married for 18 wonderful years and we too were married young(he18 and I 17) , I know alot of people probably thought it wouldn't work but, if it is true love and you know it, nothing can stop that. I have the best life with the best man ever! Wonderful poem, and that's why I gave it a 10! Sincerly, BlueLovesMemories
This is such a beautiful story, Like a love novel. Thank you for sharing.
wow, there is special or should i say different way you wrote this one. it is good. i like it. Austin
You are still my best friend and my lover that is true Rachel Ann Butler