Thursday, September 10, 2009

When We First Met Comments

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When we first set eyes on each other,
I could hear my heart beat fast.
Our eyes were locked for several moments.
Our breath was jagged.
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Laura Rodriguez
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 September 2009

When you took me in your arms, I felt like myself again. Never again shall we part, you said. You took my hand, and sent me straight off to heaven................lovley feeling in he heart at first sight it is beautifully writtenand i liked it....10 read mine love at first sight.....mary to marry....visting hell

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Blue Eyes 12 September 2009

what a lovely poem! i really like it.keep writing and getting better at it.

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