*** When We Fall Apart *** Comments

Hi I could feel something from your poem.But I don't know definitely, something limitless, ineffable...

really good piece.... dreams dont always come true for everyone... but its what you can hold on to, its what you have, what you have gained that matters. 10+

it ends with tears...maybe, u wrote ths one when ur still depressed thats why, every lines of the poems are realstic..whew....mmmmm mmmmm mm m mmmmmm mm mmmmmmmm mmmmm mm..means THIS IS REALLY GREAT HON..

Wowwwww... I just remember the song, 'Ocean apart, day after day...' You describe it so clear, love it's always complicated, , , Ohohoho, don't give up, apart by ocean or land is not a measure (?) of our faith... The Great One! ! Naru Kaede, ,

I love titles that catch my eye and this was an eye catcher for sure for me :) loving it.

It keeps me thinking..that love is like a journey..and even a journey itself! ! ! I love it! ! Really...

My heart has been so torn asunder when God took my Beloved, but your understanding of it helps to make it more tolerable! Thank you!

Very true indeed! ...I fell in love with your poem.....10

This is a great poem. The words, the beautiful pictures... The last stanza is the best!

nice poetry...specially the last stanza.

eye have developed a stYle of eye eye write like eye am speaking to mye heart and you have written this one almost the same way keep it up sahib

Very deep and moving...

This poem flows together beautifully. Something every poet strives for. An absolutely wonderful read!

So sad, the deeper you love the stronger the pain when you don't get love back. Your poem is beautifully written. Thumbs up! Keep up your good work! JYJY

Awww, From the explosion of love to breaking a heart. Sad, but sweet. Excellent work!

very expressive and thrilling

beautiful......keep it up! !

very expressive of the volatile emotions experienced during the breakup of a relationship.

Cold air in summer day. Am petrified.

agree with Maddy Macleod, Daniel Partlow (and i'm sure everyone thought so) it's a sad loss. i've never lost a lover cause i never have one (mother said that if you like someone you should marry him/her) But, did you mean Krakatao/krakatau? (Because as far as i know that's the name of.. mountain, right?)