Sunday, March 5, 2006

When We Are Gone Comments

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When we are gone and the plates of the earth
have shrugged,
and the cupboards rattle and the rafters sift,
and the groaning household teeters on the brink
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Mike Finley
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Michael Shepherd 16 March 2006

Some nice music here. The final couple rhymes seem to work well in keeping a sense of form, where they're used.

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