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I think that's brilliantly related. I agree with Sandra. t x

What a wonderful story! I am deeply touched. You should have entered the contest, This one is definately a winner. You have my applause. Love, Sandra

Mel, i have told you time and again your such a talented writer, you should have entered your stories never fail to move me and make me think, and smile and of course laugh out loud, so let the world know what we already know, how brilliant your poems are... love andy..

Well, it's like a beautiful story, even the hugging with names I recognize gave reason to smile...You should enter this in whatever contest you're speaking of..You're good...had to look up two of the words you've written here myself...so you are on a real high tier of excellence here, way beyond my realm....great.......marci.xo

Wonderful piece of writing. I don't think I could have even started to put this together. Brilliant that's what it is. You'd have won the contest there's no doubt about that! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

That was beautiful Melvina.

The only thing that I can possibly say is 'I don't know why in the world you didn't enter the contest! ! ' Well done.

Melvina, your story here touched more than one cord with me. Your story was almost fact to one person I know who by chance owns a farm. The farm where I retreat to at weekends. There are still some hurdles he has to overcome with the local Council. Luckily he has the backing from all of us, plus some of the media as well. Getting back to your poem, wonderfully constructed and using all the words to their full advantage to drive the story along to a wonderful conclusion. A brilliant write here and you should have entered the contest. An original idea put across as only you can do it. Top marks from me and thanks for sharing it. David