Wednesday, May 21, 2008

When U Look At Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

When u look in to my eyes can u see all the anger i hold
For someone to ask me why would be pretty bold
Because i dont think anyone can handle my true story
In it lies no fairy tale or any type of glory
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Jim French 26 February 2009

This is a powerful poem that evokes emotion. It doesn't leave with a warm glow. But rather an intense sense of frustration that abuse happens all over the world. Well done for producing a thought provoking piece.10+

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Olumide Ayodele 03 September 2008

the beauty of your poem is that it has a way of enfolding one with its presence.captivating! simply captivating!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 September 2008

A poem with different taste, enjoyed.

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