Monday, April 9, 2018

When Trust Is Broken (Reverse Fibonacci Poem) Comments

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Betrayal destroys happiness
when trust is broken
wounded hearts
slowly
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Chris Embrick
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 April 2018

A powerful short write. It depicts realities of life. Well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

This poem is very thought provoking. When trust is broken this brings sadness. Betrayal destroys happiness and you have rightly observed this in society. An amazing poem is shared...10

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